I Did Not Need ChatGPT To Write This

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Too Much Truth

Age gives rise to strange thoughts…

I blinked, and youth became yesterday

My children approach fifty

My grandchildren are the singularity

The great parody of life

That we become humorously exaggerated imitations

of our former selves

An excess of saggy skin over stringy muscle

Deeply etched lines that trace smiles and frowns

long gone

Oversized joints that prefer the part of Newton’s

Law that states:

Objects at rest prefer to remain at rest

Inertia hurts less

Vision that tends to look inward more clearly than

outward

Ears that grow large but hear little

Hair once raven, or red, or flaxen

Now gray

Only gray, like the ash of a burned-out fire

But we are not burned out!

We may appear grotesque and vacant behind

rheumy eyes

Our warped forms serve to disguise the sizzle and

spit within

The knowing that comes from decades lived

And the rage that flares when we are

Overlooked, or coddled, or condescended to

We are not invisible, incapable,

Or insignificant

And yes, we are closer to death than 97.2% of the

world’s population

So listen up!

When we die, our wisdom dies with us

The last generation to grow old naturally,

Passes away

And so does this world as we know it.

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  1. Unknown's avatar Anonymous
    Jul 05, 2025 @ 16:29:22

    well said

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  2. janet jnelson.ws's avatar janet jnelson.ws
    Jul 05, 2025 @ 21:27:55

    Sherry,

    Excellent words. Beautiful poem.

    Jan


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  3. Unknown's avatar Anonymous
    Jul 06, 2025 @ 02:05:03

    Loved this. At 91, I can only say that aging is the reverse of blooming from infancy to adulthood as days go faster as we reach the end of life. Physical limitations become more onerous and limiting. The best days are those where one has to do nothing. But there are still times of joy.

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  4. jamesddanburg's avatar jamesddanburg
    Jul 06, 2025 @ 06:42:38

    Sherry- I wanted to thank you for your ongoing posts. They are insightful and inspirational. BTW we met long ago @ Trygg’s, and we talked about Iran.

    Blessings

    Jim Danburg

    An Information Asset Protection and Resiliency Portfolio Strategist

    With expertise in Information Security, Classification, Risk, Governance, Compliance, and Resiliency (BCDR)

    M:612.210.9771 james.danburg@gmail.com

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